Promise? Promise
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Ongoing9m
Last published Mon, Aug 24, 2015
I started to walk away, tears brimming in my eyes as i started shaking. He grabbed me back and spun me around. "Promise me you will come back" James said. I was silent for a moment. "Promise?" He said again. I swallowed and looked at him, "I promise" I said as i faked a smile and walked off to start my new life.
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