Falling

This is a short story about a girl who falls head over heals for a boy. It shows a common situation where one part loves the other more and I got very emotional while writing it. I got so many ideas and thought while writing it, I just coulnd't seem to get it right on the paper. I don't know if it's any good, so it would mean a whole lot to me if you read it and gave me feedback!
Thank you:*