Breaking To Save
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Ongoing16m
Last published Wed, Aug 26, 2015
I hadn't ever imagined talking to the girl who had rumor after rumor chasing after her. I also had never imagined that I would have to choose between her and my father. I wouldn't have imagined that I would be stuck to choose between a friend whose trust I was trying to earn and my father, who wanted me to become his government pawn.
When everything turned upside down, I learned her deepest secrets.
When my life spiraled out of control was when I had realized that the worst was yet to come.
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