Thin Man in the Thick Forest

This is a narrative I wrote for my English class a while ago. I got like a 48 out of 50 on it or something like that. I hope you all like it. Anyway here's the real description:

A girl wakes up in a dark forest at night with no memory what so ever. As she explores her way through the darkness she finds eight pages, all with a dark hidden message. What she doesn't realize is someone; something is hunting her in the shadows.