Prologue Cuts to Vision2
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Last published Thu, Aug 27, 2015
For those of you who didn't know (and that is probably quite a few judging by the low number of copies that sold), I once wrote a book. I thought I was being cute and named it Vision2 (i.e. Vision Squared); however, most computer programs and websites do not like to put it up correctly. Doh! Anyway, when I put the book out I cut some of the prologue sections (per my wonderful editor, Matt) because they dealt more with the relationship story and didn't add to the pace of the adventure that was the main focus of the book...Or some such nonsense ;-)
I decided to put up the missing pieces on here just for fun! Enjoy!
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