The Wattpad Critic
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You will tell me what I read, and I will give you my opinion on the story. Doesn't matter the genre. I will not always read the full book, but I will always rate them. I will rate it like movies, and from those rating you can say weather you read it or not. I'm never going to spoil it, just tell you how I feel.
Every story I critic is put in my Table of Contents
If you don't like what I have to say, don't read this. This is not meant to offend, this is not biased. I am just writing my opinion, if you don't like people giving their opinion then don't put your work out.
Enjoy.
*Also I prefer stories that aren't well known. Since those who are, have enough publicity as is.
*Another thing is that if you want me to critique your story DM me. And if you comment in the comment section I won't respond.
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