Intertwined Lines

This is a story about a husband and wife, and the people they touch whether directly or indirectly. Also I may not know exactly how the entire story is going to go, I promise you if you read to the end of the story it will have a happy ending, I've already planned it. So if you have any advice on how to add to the story, please let me know, the only thing I won't be changing is the ending or the total use of pronouns instead of nouns. It's a style I'm trying and I think it makes the story more relate-able.