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The Critique

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Time 2h 32m

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I'm just like the rest of you. A normal person who just loves to write and read. But the thing is, writing can never be perfect and there are many writers out there who want their work to be at least 99.99% amazing. Here I critique stories; I may be harsh, I may be cruel, but hey, I'm flat out honest and that's what everyone on Wattpad needs. 

So if you want your story to be on here, PM me or comment on this story. But you have been warned and prepare for the blow. 

May the force be with you.All Rights Reserved

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