Where'd it all go wrong?
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Ongoing6m
Last published Fri, May 10, 2013
"I ...I .... I was dead... I d...di...died how am I here, what happened!" I stared at him. His eyes just stared back in mine, tears streaming down my face. " please " I whispered " TELL ME!!!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. He just stood there shocked. Then I burst into tears, he went over to me but before he got near me I pushed him away and ran back to the room I was in before. I slammed the door shut making sure it made a large bang then I jumped on the bed, under the covers and I burst into tears slowly falling asleep and darkness taking over my eyes.
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