Vampires Chapter One: This Isn't Real

This is a story I started on August 12th, 2011, and finished up the 13th. It's about this boyfriend and girlfriend, Ryan and Sam, and Ryan's a vampire. Don't worry, it'll have it's love parts and "every-series-has-this" parts, but this is definitely gonna be original. I'll make sure of that, because I don't want to make some "everybody-has-already-seen-this" high school drama with preps, losers, boyfriends, vampires and werewolves. 'Cause in those, the loser is pretty, the prep is mean, the preps bf ends up dating the loser, and the prep ends up being all sad 'n' stuff. Very predictable. So, enjoy, give me criticism, but not hate, and support inspires me to do better, just so ya know. :) K bye!