Dentanus' Revenge

Dentanus' Revenge

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Set in Old England, way before America was discovered, this story contains magical and mythical creatures. They range from Dragons, Elves and Fairies to Sorcerers and Witches. WARNING: This story might just blow your mind :] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "As I walked further into the clearing I began to hear and smell all the things Iwas so used to. The sound of the river that ran straight through the village, it babbled a lot. Then there was the sound of the villagers bustling around getting the days chores done and preparing for dinner. As another minute passed I could see the dotting of the houses that wrapped in a big circle that was the Kalr-Mak village, with the small market in the center. The Kalr-Mak village {Inside present-day Bristol} was not to big, not to small. I'd say counting every being, old and young, there were probably 200 of us, and that wasn't counting the 5 in my family."
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At five years old Nimue moved to Camelot to live with her uncle, the kings own adviser, Merlin Ambrousius. Four years later another equally mysterious young person arrives in the city and takes up residence with Nim and her uncle. His name is Arthur, and to him a destiny is revealed that he never even dared to dream of. Nim and her uncle along with a few others will accompany Arthur on his journey and none of their lives will ever be quiet or simple or safe again.... This is my first upload on a site like this and i would just like to get some fed back. I write a lot, this ones kinda like a side story. I'm going to admit I always feel rather stupid when my friends read my stuff because I'm always sure its awful and they just aren't going to tell me so this seemed the best way to get some more honest fed back. always looking for advice if anyone is willing to give it. Thank you for reading this (if anyone actually does) comments and suggestions would be much appreciated and any stories that you would recommended i read :) Thanks RomanHobbit

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