Our/My Trip to Japan

Greetings Most Awesome Scholars and fellow compassionate writers,
Sadly, I don't have some one to change the title of my essay. I need you, Most Wonderful Evie and/or Fabulous Landon...Although, Landon probably would keep it a secret from knowledge since he is the "boss" of all great knowledge. Ha! Ha! I just figured it out! sigh...I just lost my essay, though...Now, you can laugh! You are smarter than me! I do love and miss all of you!

This is an essay I was required to write about my trip to Japan. As usual, I wrote it in a different format than how other teachers would write it. I'm interested in your feedback; the writing; should I change the names to "protect the innocent." I used names to compliment those individuals and let them know they were in my thoughts as I listened and learned in Japan and all their actions in our classroom were very much justified. However, they might not take it that way. Please, let me know if you think I might offend anyone.