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Loved You First [ Lilo ]
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Ongoing, First published Mar 30, 2013
Mature
Everything is just happening all to fast . It seems like time has flew by since I've first laid eyes on the beautiful girl before me . It feels like the first time I've breathed her scent of Coconut and fresh flowers . It feels like its only the first time I'm holding her hand in mine , and looking into those crystal blue eyes that I've grown fawn of . 

I looked in the audience of the small church and my eyes gazed upon all of the friends that have supported me and all of the family that have been there along the way . Everything was perfect right now. 

I looked at all of the bridesmaids and all of my bestmen because really , who could only choose one out of my four best lads ? Louis and Liam were hand in hand with tears in their eyes , Zayn who was smiling the brightest smile there ever and then there was -

" You okay ?" I heard her whisper and just then did I realize that I was zoned out . I heard the laughter of everyone in the building and smiled .

" I couldn't be better."
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