The Criminals Eyes
  • Reads 545
  • Votes 44
  • Parts 7
  • Time 30m
  • Reads 545
  • Votes 44
  • Parts 7
  • Time 30m
Ongoing, First published Sep 02, 2015
Mature
What happens when straight A student Amelia Gains runs into .

"Who are you and why are you in my house" i grumble frustrated the intruder interrupted my nap.
"I don't have to tell you anything , but please try  babe" he said sarcastically. He was wearing a dark gray hoodie and some old baggy worn out jeans. His face was so far back in his hood you couldn't see his face. Leaving it a black hole with a voice.
"Look here Mr. I am exhausted and I don't have time for your dumbass games so either get the hell out  or I will have security see you out. Got it!" I said agitated.
"Oh really? Hot stuff I don't think you know who your dealing with." He said absent from his chair he was previously sitting in. I looked around the room but couldn't see him. The first thing in my mind is...

Oh Shit! Now what did i get myself into.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hey guys please don't steal my stuff. I don't mind if you borrow some names or use some of my ideas but don't say they are all yours.
Please and thank you.
All Rights Reserved
Sign up to add The Criminals Eyes to your library and receive updates
or
Content Guidelines
You may also like
Slide 1 of 1
Saving Elliot ✓ cover

Saving Elliot ✓

32 parts Complete

Elliot Jensen and Elliot Fintry have a lot in common. They share the same name, the same house, the same school, oh and they hate each other but, as they will quickly learn, there is a fine line between love and hate.