the unwanted + the rejected = the survivor

huuuh I am kinda of nervous so please make some comments I would really appreciate
Jackie is the runt of the pack the unwanted the weak link the pathetic 14 year old who can't stand for herself or even fight for her life.She is evreyones punching bag ,even her own parents and siblings despice her and treat her like dirt. They think that she is a pitiful excuse of a wolf just because she hasn't shifted yet when in fact she is special and unique she is the last soulshifter she can shift to any animal real or mythical.She hangs to her mysirable life waiting for her mate to save her from her cruel pack but when her MATE is none other then the soon to be alpha that bullied her for all her life and rejected her in front of the hole pack.She is broken lifless on the verge of killing herself ! She runs away from her mate away from her so called familly so called pack.Only to meet with her true destiny and makes a promise to herself she will never be the fat ugly girl anymore she will become the best fighter ever and NOBODY will stand in her way. After 4 years of endless trainig and agonising pain she is the leader of the great coucil's fighters.She marked her name in werewolf history as the most skilled assasin and merciless killer. but when she is forced to go back to hell to protect the packs from the hunters she swore to make them regret.