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this is every ruff draft almost more of a story line. it still needs a lot of work. i'm looking for thoughts and ideas. thanks for reading. i'm still very new to this whole writing thing, so bare with me.
Writing from the point of view of a 13 girl named Nikki as she is troubled by dreams that are so life like they leave feeling and bruise when she wakes. The dream are trying to take her somewhere or tell her things that she needs to know as she is the key to helping her family and friends with something that she has no idea about. It all starts with a book that she has been given as a birthday gift for her thirteen birthday. Soon she will learn that the life is not how she thought.
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