Balance's Forbidden

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Partes 1

Continúa<5 mins

Última publicación sáb, sep 5, 2015

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Acción y Suspenso

Etiquetasaction adventure fantasy fiction

I don` know how to describe this book because it`s rough draft but I could really use the feedback, so please read and comment. WARNING: SLOW UPDATES (extremely slow).

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