Upside Down Is My Favorite Position

Roselynn Wilson is your typical sixteen year old girl: gets average grades, has a select circle of friends, and just got her drivers licence. However, when Rose's soccer team breaks up, all hope seems lost. As a temporary replacement, her father decides to bring Rose to his pickup games he and a few of his coworkers play weekly. Little does she know, one of her fathers coworkers, a 28 year old, impossibly attractive foreign man named Alireza, or Rez, will become a constant intrusion in her thoughts, plaguing her everyday life. She cannot comprehend his hold over her and fears the strength of her attraction to someone so significantly older than herself. Deep down, she knows it is wrong and could never, should never, happen. But she wants it to anyways.

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