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You Let Me Surrender

MiquelaVeronique

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Reads 2,669
Votes 354
Parts 72
Time 1h 5m

MiquelaVeronique

Mature

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Take me back to December
The place I remember
My haven where you brought warmth to my winter
Huddling me in, and letting me surrender 


Dear reader, 
This is a collection of love poems describing a teenage romance. It has its ups and downs, its rises and falls, its breakups and make-ups, and everything in between. I hope you all like You Let Me Surrender as much as I enjoy writing it. I hope some of you can connect to it too, because after all a true love is when that person can shield you in front of the world, and ultimately let you surrender. 
Xoxo, 
Miquéla 

P.S. Please note that there will be some references and indications to sex in here, however not to the extent where I think it should be classified as "mature". If you believe otherwise, do not hesitate to let me know.

P.P.S. I highly recommend reading the poems in order, rather than skipping around because they tell a story. I hope you enjoy!


~Sweetest Comments Ever: 

Really heartwarming poem... I truly love your work... -delicatefeelings 

It was absolutely amazing... the way you've written... -sweetsoul121

Really like this. Very pretty -JessQvist

Beautiful as ever!!! -sweetsoul121

This was a great book. I loved all the poems u wrote. Dear I hope you will write more works like this!  -delicatefeelings

This is really good :) I like how it's a poem but a story -mcapeles

Dear author, 
This was one of the best book of poems I have ever read...
Truly you are a great writer..
Hoping and waiting for more works from you in the future
-sweetsoul121All Rights Reserved

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