The Girl Who Cried Farm

hi guys im new to this so dont judge if it sucks..... :3 plz and thank you this is a love / sad story .as you can see by the name its called the girl who cried farm. its a story about a young girl being taken by people called the farm the farms job is to take kids mostly young men to work in fields and do labor ect. they take children that where either soled to them by there parents or orphaned at a young age .the reason they mostly take young men is that they think they will do better in the fields than the girls. the girls that where soled to them either got killed or got forced to do the cleaning food ect and lots of other bad stuff .the main character in this story. is a young girl that was not only taken by the farm .but was forced to act like a male during her stay at this stranger place . there she sets her eyes on the guy of her dreams . take a moment and read it if you can if you want me to change anything let me know thank you !!!!!