The Humble Opinion of a WOM
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  • Reads 8,352
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  • Parts 26
  • Time 2h 19m
SkriBlerLenZ
Ongoing, First published Aug 21, 2011
2011abuseaccidentactionadventureahaheartbahbayalexa-cullenamazingamericaantarcticaartassassinawardsawesomebambibanishedbeachbeastbeautybestbirdie-pieblackbluebluebutterfly231campcarchangescharmingchasingchasingneverlandcheatedcinderellacivilcolorcolorfulcrashcrimsonwingedkittencursedaddysdancingdarkestzombiedeadlydeathdiarydoubledowndrakenthekrakendreamerdriversemoendingenglandenglishfairyfan-ficfantasyfellfictionfightingfirstforgottenfreefriendsgabster485geekgeogerardgirlgoregriefgrippinggrossheirhigherthantheskyhomorhorrorimmortalinterviewizzybellerainejellystar3409joeyjdogjustjustkindacrazykaitlinkennymac31killkindslabyrinthlaurendmsmithlifelil2lattelittlelittlemisslollipoplostlovelyrix21madmagicalmanmanimaybemjabm147modernmucnablesmysterynewoceanoffomgttylttynoriginaloverparanormalpartypersonpixidixichikplayerposterprinceprojectquadkeyrememberingreviewriversroamceromancesadschoolsci-fiseriesshapshiftershesilverxstarssinsskitzosmilesspinsplitstoroystrongsuicidesundaysunshinesurfingsuspensetailteenteen-ficthrillertitanictradgedytreetwistunderneathvampirevampiresversionwalkingsunshinewarwattywavesweddingweepingwerewolveswillowwomwrittenxlive-laugh-love-22xzayilatanzectaueuszombiezombies
WOM - it almost sounds like worm, but it actually means "Wattpad Official Meany".
I read two FULL chapters of your story, leave a comment and vote on each, write a summary of my critique/review, and interview you!

I sound harsh. But, seriously, how would you get better if no one ever told you your dialogue sucks?

NB: In no way am I saying that your description and or dialogue suck. I am merely using it as a humorous illustration.
No offence, puns, Trade Mark violations, or any of that other jazz intended.
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2011abuseaccidentactionadventureahaheartbahbayalexa-cullenamazingamericaantarcticaartassassinawardsawesomebambibanishedbeachbeastbeautybestbirdie-pieblackbluebluebutterfly231campcarchangescharmingchasingchasingneverlandcheatedcinderellacivilcolorcolorfulcrashcrimsonwingedkittencursedaddysdancingdarkestzombiedeadlydeathdiarydoubledowndrakenthekrakendreamerdriversemoendingenglandenglishfairyfan-ficfantasyfellfictionfightingfirstforgottenfreefriendsgabster485geekgeogerardgirlgoregriefgrippinggrossheirhigherthantheskyhomorhorrorimmortalinterviewizzybellerainejellystar3409joeyjdogjustjustkindacrazykaitlinkennymac31killkindslabyrinthlaurendmsmithlifelil2lattelittlelittlemisslollipoplostlovelyrix21madmagicalmanmanimaybemjabm147modernmucnablesmysterynewoceanoffomgttylttynoriginaloverparanormalpartypersonpixidixichikplayerposterprinceprojectquadkeyrememberingreviewriversroamceromancesadschoolsci-fiseriesshapshiftershesilverxstarssinsskitzosmilesspinsplitstoroystrongsuicidesundaysunshinesurfingsuspensetailteenteen-ficthrillertitanictradgedytreetwistunderneathvampirevampiresversionwalkingsunshinewarwattywavesweddingweepingwerewolveswillowwomwrittenxlive-laugh-love-22xzayilatanzectaueuszombiezombies
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