This is basically a short story I did for English class. I already got my teachers comments but I want more opinions to see if I should carry on trying to write. It basically about a princess who suffers from some losses but in the end... Actually I'm not going to say ;) You'll just have to find out yourself. BTW keep in mind I am 13 and haven't had much experience writing, however please be completely honest. Enjoy! :)All Rights Reserved