Lovely Surprise

Lovely Surprise

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WpMetadataReadTamamlanmış Hikaye Per, Eyl 10, 2015<5 mins
It was such a beautiful day outside. The boy had finally taken his girlfriend somewhere that wasn't crowded, loud, or even smelly. He had brought her to one of the most calm places he knew about, an empty clean, fresh, clear-watered creek. For, the two have been dating for about 4 years, and they were both about to go off to collage. They walked down the stone path, through a forest that lead them to the clean creek, holding hands with a tight grip. Once they made it there, the sight was breath-taking. The girl couldn't think of anything else more wonderful than this. The guy then stopped both of them from walking and made direct eye contact with the girl. He then got down on one knee- making the girl gasp in awe- he then looked down.. and said in the calmest way he could possibly say... took a slight inhale and said "what are those?" Pointing at the girls shoes.
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"All's fair in love and war, or some shit, right?" He said, his smirk drawing to a slight sneer as he padded towards the open balcony. He rested his hands on the guardrail before letting out an exasperated sigh, thunder rolling behind it. The rain cascaded onto the tile in sheets, blowing the soft cream curtains back and forth. "Or some shit." I smiled, walking towards him. I could see the tension grow in his back and shoulders, his struggle evident. I placed my hand gently on his shoulder, trying my best to reassure him. I could feel his breathing hitch slightly at my touch; his response was all I needed to reassure me I was doing the right thing. My touch was welcomed. I leaned my head on his back, wrapping my hands around his waist. I longed to take away his pain; I hated seeing anyone this upset. She wasn't worth his time. He said so himself- he's never found a woman worth changing plans for. Maybe he meant since her, I can't be sure. I am, however, hoping to show him that, one day, that woman might be me. ****** Jeanie is a spunky assistant living in Atlanta. With a spotty past and a knack for telling it like it is, she's found herself stuck with a string of dead-end jobs and nothing to show for her sacrifices. She had always been an over-emotional, over-thinking, anxiety filled woman. The last 13 years of her life consisted of fear until, one day, it didn't. She took her life back. With the start of a new job, she moved thousands of miles from her home- from her past. Join her as she discovers the most important relationship she'll ever have- the one with herself. *This story contains mature situations and lots of swearing, proceed with caution. Please comment and vote!!

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