Lovely Surprise
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Complete, First published Sep 10, 2015
It was such a beautiful day outside. The boy had finally taken his girlfriend somewhere that wasn't crowded, loud, or even smelly. He had brought her to one of the most calm places he knew about, an empty clean, fresh, clear-watered creek. For, the two have been dating for about 4 years, and they were both about to go off to collage. They walked down the stone path, through a forest that lead them to the clean creek, holding hands with a tight grip. Once they made it there, the sight was breath-taking. The girl couldn't think of anything else more wonderful than this. The guy then stopped both of them from walking and made direct eye contact with the girl. He then got down on one knee- making the girl gasp in awe- he then looked down.. and said in the calmest way he could possibly say... took a slight inhale and said "what are those?" Pointing at the girls shoes.
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"It's beautiful" I sigh. "Yes it is" Blaze whispers next to me. I looked at him and saw he was just staring at me. "Why are you staring?" "Because it's a beautiful view" I lightly hit him and laugh. "I think I'm psychic" he blurts out. "Why?" I laugh at the randomness. "Because I can see you in my future" he laughs with me. "Is this a cheesiness competition?" I raise my eyebrow. "It wouldn't be a competition if I already won" "Cocky much?" "You love me though" "Nah" I laugh. "Let's start!" "Roses are red violets are blue, I can't rhyme but can I date you?" "No, but that was good" I admit and start thinking."Are you a magician? Because whenever I look at you everyone else disappears," I grin proudly. "Was your dad king for a day?" he starts. "No, why?" "He must have been to make a princess like you," he winks and I roll my eyes with a smile. I pretended to receive a call and he frowns at me. I put the phone down and pretend look worried. "Who was it?" he asks. "The cops, there was a theft" I say. "What? By who?" he looks really worried that I almost feel guilty. "I told them you stole my heart" I laugh and he just stares at me. "You got me but you know what? I'd never play hide and seek with you because someone like you is impossible to find" he smirks. "Fine, you won" I groan. "Teach me your ways, Sensei" -*- What if you only have 31 days to live? What would you do? Sulk and be contented of the short-lived life? Catherine Walsh is a normal girl with an abnormal situation. She was diagnosed with "Cooley's Anemia" and had her life on a string. She plans her Bucket List. She does it with Blaze Weston. In this adventurous and romantic story, will love conquer all situations? -*- WARNING: This book has a lot of uncensored swearing, read with caution.