My Beginning

I was born into this world and still here.
1999was my tenth birthday I couldn't be happier.We went to my grandma's house .As soon as we got inside my mother screamed."what's wrong-ahhh"I said.My grandma was on the couch unblinking,unmovin,not breathing."Get back girls"mom said referring to Tammy and me. We went back to the car and sobbed uncontrollably.We hoped she would be here but it was her time. I looked up and saw mom on the phone sulking. I went to my mom when she was done and hugged her. We both loved grandma much. When the ambulance got here my mom was finished crying.My mom told the police that they were visiting and saw here like that. I burst into tears. We went home and it was a gloomy day. My mom stayed mostly in her room and didn't do anything. She only came out to order food since she didn't feel like cooking .I was sad,tomorrow was my birthday and it was not gonna be fun.

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