The Mind's Reality
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Last published Tue, Oct 20, 2015
Emily Pattel,a confused and depressed teenaged girl,commits suicide,upon losing her way and worth in the world. Her attempt failed. Because it was ultimately unsuccessful,she woke up. But she wasn't greeted with harsh reality. Instead,she was welcomed with open arms...somewhere else. Somewhere far away. Somewhere she knew all too well. Her mind.
After the incident,her body may have wanted to wake up but her mind refused. Now,Emily's trapped in her own mind. After being told where she was,she couldn't help but naïvely feel like she knows her way around it like the back of her hand. She was wrong. Nothing is ever what it seems,especially in Emily's mind. Trapped inside her brain's own version of reality,she needs to do what she knows how to do best: escape.
However,Emily is incapable of remembering why she committed suicide. She forgot that she even did it. Without knowing the problem or the root of it,she can't discover a solution. The only leads are her rare flashbacks and the peculiar characters that her mind has created. Can Emily escape or will it all end before she even has the chance to?
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