Alice Foster's Murder
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Last published Sat, Nov 26, 2011
One day, as Maybella is taking a walk in the forest nearby her new home in the town of Hallandalle, she finds a broken-down and abandoned house. As she walks in she hears whispers. Whispers for help. Whispers too quiet that she cannot hear. She sees a girl from the past. She quietly plays with her doll, but she looks at her. Help, she says barely loud enough to hear.
Follow Maybella as she embarks a journey. A journey within time to solve the mystery. To find the missing puzzle piece. To find a lost murderer.
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