Retired

Retired

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Newly retired from the imperial army after serving 60 years, Drake Daemon wishes for a peaceful, ordinary life. However, a villain from the past, forces him to face what he left behind in order to save everyone he loves. *** Highest Rankings: 1st in Military, 2th in Science-Fiction, 1st in Galactic Current Ranking: 1st in Galactic *** I am re-writing this story. You can check it out on my page. However, due to my studies, I am a hiatus. I cannot promise when I will be back. May fortune bless those who step up those who oppress them. *** "Hey man, 'Retired' is such a great book! I love it so much, I stayed up until 4 am (my classes start at 6) reading it ... Twice!" -SPARTANMAN114 "Really well done interesting story... I finished all but the last chapter in one sitting. Nice to be retired." -Dale0505 "He kept getting hit in the left shoulder lol." -PeterMcnemar "Well written well paced." -Aleonos "This is the best written story I've read on this site." -straightguy "I think I am falling in love with this book ... You have done wonders to this book and I absolutely love it" -facemaker123 "We all just want peace, sometimes the price is too high... then those that can take it to those who would disrupt the peace." -relon45
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This is a show script inspired heavily by many different classic franchises like Star Wars, Star Trek, Battlestar: Galactica and Halo. The story is a military sci-fi action show with a bit of drama in between and some fantasy elements later on and also sprinkled with comedy now and again. The show is also heavily peppered with music terminology and music references like the names of certain ships and aspects of war and the names of factions specially. I made this show as an allegory for my experience in band and all characters are based on real people and the relationships between them. If you are interested in the show script and want to provide helpful criticism and/or ask questions about the show, you can contact me on the Marching Fleet Instagram page linked below. A story about war in the universe. I joined the band at my high school as a brass player, specifically tuba, and became obsessed with all things music, it was always present in all things I did. One day I made a drawing of a ship and called it the "SS Vanguard Brass" and sent it to my friends in brass. One responded by saying "hey, that should be a fan fiction or something"(Duclos), so I sat down and thought about it and decided that if I was going to do it, even though I adore movies, it would have to be a show. So I spent a few hours of my day that I had to spare and wrote a pilot that I then shared with my friends. They adored the script and said they would support me with creative help(meaning they would judge would I write). A few months later it is now being read by many people I know, including the director of my high school band. For Doc version: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1llu5LPXMZ0zrVBpUwjLMO1w73AkGZwKrRAs8FdCAf0s/edit?usp=sharing If interested on news for the show, follow the Marching Fleet Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/marching_fleet/

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