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My Immortal || The Worst FanFiction of History || [With Commentary.]

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[ My Immortal is one of the worst FanFictions to date and used to belong on the site FanFiction.net. The FanFic revolved around a gothic Mary Sue character with the most obscene name known to man. This gothic, My Chemical Romance wanna be vampire goes to Hogwards and meets Draco, the wizard of her dreams. However things get very fucking weird. ]

I, SinfulWordMaster is going to dwell in the works of this really crappy writer and post everything and every chapter with my own commentation of certain things that go on in the scenes. However, things won't be a huge block of text; no matter how shitty grammar is, I don't do blocks of text even when doing this. 

I hope you guys hate this as much as I do. 

And please, do not flame this; I need to get the good reviews for more chapters and shit! Anyway. Enjoy this horrible recreation with commentary. 

I am not sorry.All Rights Reserved

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Always. (A Draco Malfoy Story) by dadddymalfoy

READ DESCRIPTION FIRST TO AVOID CONFUSION. -currently under revision, my grammar sucks- Joy Deveroux, the last descendant of the wealthy, pure-blooded Deveroux's, transfers to Hogwarts. What happens when she realizes she has a more twisted fate than the Slytherin Prince, Draco Malfoy? Will she be the light in the sea of darkness? (Starts in Year 3: PoA. They are 15, instead of 13.) - Contains: Mature language, Smut/Lemon, and violence. Toxic/Asshole Draco. Not possessive, not abusive. Emotional trauma is involved. Just an overall asshole, who still makes the wrong choices. - I have a few OC in this story, but I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters, storylines, references, or language. All rights go to JK Rowling. Sept 27, 2020-Nov 23, 2020

Bad Babysitter | Draco Malfoy FF by UnfunnyFriend

One day you get hired by Lucius Malfoy to take care of his 'problematic son' over summer break. But soon you discover that maybe Draco isn't the problem and help him getting to know new things while slowly falling for him. insight: "...I can feel his warm breath on my neck as he whispers this. Draco can't help but take in the feeling of our bodies pressed against each other's. His grip on my waist tightens as he keeps me in place, his lips right next to my ear. He can feel himself getting more and more aroused as the minutes pass, his body growing hot against mine. I can feel a bulge slowly, well not even slowly, forming in his swimming trunks. Draco swallows, trying to keep his body under control, but he can't. He can't ignore how much he desires me now. The feeling of me against him is driving him absolutely crazy, and he knows he should keep his distance, but he just can't. His hands hold me tighter, one resting on my stomach and slowly travelling upwards as he leans even closer to me. His heart is pounding in his chest now and his body is starting to respond in a way he can no longer hide..." TW: violence, sexuality, strong language, death etc. Every character and storyline/dialogue that is not made-up by me, belongs to JK Rowling/the Harry Potter books

One Night - Drarry by gazingnightsinlove

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