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My Immortal || The Worst FanFiction of History || [With Commentary.]

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[ My Immortal is one of the worst FanFictions to date and used to belong on the site FanFiction.net. The FanFic revolved around a gothic Mary Sue character with the most obscene name known to man. This gothic, My Chemical Romance wanna be vampire goes to Hogwards and meets Draco, the wizard of her dreams. However things get very fucking weird. ]

I, SinfulWordMaster is going to dwell in the works of this really crappy writer and post everything and every chapter with my own commentation of certain things that go on in the scenes. However, things won't be a huge block of text; no matter how shitty grammar is, I don't do blocks of text even when doing this. 

I hope you guys hate this as much as I do. 

And please, do not flame this; I need to get the good reviews for more chapters and shit! Anyway. Enjoy this horrible recreation with commentary. 

I am not sorry.All Rights Reserved

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"You're such a prick! I knew you hadn't really changed. You're just back to your old ways, torturing me." Harry can still feel Draco's hand around his arm. Their breath mingles as Harry's eyes rove around Malfoy's face. "You probably enjoy it too." "Immensely." They're so close that Harry could count Draco's eyelashes if he wanted to. "You're the worst," Harry gasps out between breaths. His heartbeat pounds overwhelmingly loud in his ears as he loses his senses. His eyes drop to Draco's lips again, and he swallows loudly, interrupting the silence that is only filled with the sound of their heavy breathing. "Fuck you Malfoy." ---- Harry is tired of being enemies with Draco. He has more important things to worry about. The most pressing of those being his real enemy, Voldemort, who is now at large. And then Draco starts acting suspicious and Harry wants to know the truth. He always tries to believe the best in people, but Harry is starting to wonder if there is any good left in Draco at all. ---- Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or any of the characters. Complete!

My Immortal (Original: XXXbloodyrists666XXX) by PieceOfCheeseUwU

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