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My Immortal || The Worst FanFiction of History || [With Commentary.]

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Parts 7
Time 2h 21m

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[ My Immortal is one of the worst FanFictions to date and used to belong on the site FanFiction.net. The FanFic revolved around a gothic Mary Sue character with the most obscene name known to man. This gothic, My Chemical Romance wanna be vampire goes to Hogwards and meets Draco, the wizard of her dreams. However things get very fucking weird. ]

I, SinfulWordMaster is going to dwell in the works of this really crappy writer and post everything and every chapter with my own commentation of certain things that go on in the scenes. However, things won't be a huge block of text; no matter how shitty grammar is, I don't do blocks of text even when doing this. 

I hope you guys hate this as much as I do. 

And please, do not flame this; I need to get the good reviews for more chapters and shit! Anyway. Enjoy this horrible recreation with commentary. 

I am not sorry.All Rights Reserved

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Lost Memories // Drarry by celestine80

"You're such a prick! I knew you hadn't really changed. You're just back to your old ways, torturing me." Harry can still feel Draco's hand around his arm. Their breath mingles as Harry's eyes rove around Malfoy's face. "You probably enjoy it too." "Immensely." They're so close that Harry could count Draco's eyelashes if he wanted to. "You're the worst," Harry gasps out between breaths. His heartbeat pounds overwhelmingly loud in his ears as he loses his senses. His eyes drop to Draco's lips again, and he swallows loudly, interrupting the silence that is only filled with the sound of their heavy breathing. "Fuck you Malfoy." ---- Harry is tired of being enemies with Draco. He has more important things to worry about. The most pressing of those being his real enemy, Voldemort, who is now at large. And then Draco starts acting suspicious and Harry wants to know the truth. He always tries to believe the best in people, but Harry is starting to wonder if there is any good left in Draco at all. ---- Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or any of the characters. Complete!

Malfoys Pleasure by Lace710

"Still shaking over me, wait till i put my dick in you." Y/N and Draco Malfoy ~ *+SMUT+* *+ OVER 15+* ~~~~~~~~~~~~ CHARACTERS: : Y/N, Y/L/N : Draco Malfoy : Hermione Granger : Mattheo Riddle : Blaise Zabini : Lorenzo Berkshire : Harry Potter : Ron Weasley : Pansy Parkinson : Professors(all) Y/N is on her fifth year of Hogwarts, You and Draco had been enemies since the first year, You are Gryffindor and he is in Slytherin. You never paid attention to each other until this year. Y/N BACKSTORY*** You never knew your parents you normally stayed with your Godfather/Godmother. Your parents best friends before they disappeared. ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• THIS STORY IS COMPLETED! {I ALSO MAKE EDITS AND SLYTHERIN BOYS REACT ON TIK TOK ^^^} SOCIALS\\ TIK TOK:IJSEDITL INSTAGRAM:IJSEDITL

Forbidden Love (A Dramione fanfic) by thatwriterizzy

So I wrote this fanfic a few years ago and it's terrible! I wrote it purely for my own enjoyment and the only reason I haven't deleted it is because to somehow got 600 votes. What you might enjoy more is my Drarry fanfic. Read this if you want but don't start complaining about it's awfulness in the comments because I did warn you! Cover designed by dreamescape12. All characters, places etc. owned by JK Rowling

Secret Child of Bellatrix Lestrange by Imademiwizard998

THIS WAS ONE OF MY FIRST BOOKS. ITS NOT VERY GOOD BUT READ IF YOU WANT TO. IM WRITING A BOOK VERY SIMILAR TO THIS RIGHT NOW SO MAYBE GO READ THAT INSTEAD. YOUVE BEEN WARNED! Imagine being bellatrix lestrange's secret child. Father undetermined but you have your hunches. Hidden away and barely acknowledged. You finally get to go to Hogwarts. The freedom you've always been craving. But that's when your real problems begin. Edit: there are a lot of inaccuracies and I plan to go through and edit this story at some point. I'm trying to finish one if my other stories. This story has lots of problems though. I'm sorry but I hope you still read. No smut. This is my first fanfic so no judgement. Pls be nice. Ik there are some spelling and grammar stuff pls enjoy.

Always. (A Draco Malfoy Story) by dadddymalfoy

READ DESCRIPTION FIRST TO AVOID CONFUSION. -currently under revision, my grammar sucks- Joy Deveroux, the last descendant of the wealthy, pure-blooded Deveroux's, transfers to Hogwarts. What happens when she realizes she has a more twisted fate than the Slytherin Prince, Draco Malfoy? Will she be the light in the sea of darkness? (Starts in Year 3: PoA. They are 15, instead of 13.) - Contains: Mature language, Smut/Lemon, and violence. Toxic/Asshole Draco. Not possessive, not abusive. Emotional trauma is involved. Just an overall asshole, who still makes the wrong choices. - I have a few OC in this story, but I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters, storylines, references, or language. All rights go to JK Rowling. Sept 27, 2020-Nov 23, 2020

The Boy I Love by SweetPea607

"Umm I-I was uhh j-just leaving" I stuttered. {why am I having trouble speaking? especially to Malfoy!} He looks me up and down and I some how feel even smaller. He then looks directly in my eyes with a smile. "What are you doing here Potter? Don't you know it can be dangerous down here? Especially for a Gryffindor" I don't know why but I'm at a loss for words. I've never felt this way with him before. The tone of his voice, the sly smile on his face, and the way he's pining my body. It's just all so...... ------------------------- Everyone has to come back to Hogwarts to repeat the year because of the war. Harry wants a relationship, but can't find anyone that is gay and won't use him for his fame. Draco has had his eyes set on Harry for years, but thinks he's straight. What happens when Draco over hears that Harry IS gay and thinks Draco is cute? I know it's a horrible description but the story is good I promise. Set after the war and everyone is still alive...except Harry's parents and Voldemort (obviously) and it's going to be based like the movies with a few hints to the books. It's easier to spin things the way I want them like this. LOVEEEE comments. also not my cover art ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ Adult content (aka SMUT😈) Strong language _____________ DISCONTINUED _____________ #1 bottomharry 11/16/21 #1 topdraco 11/16/21 #126 drarry 9/4/23 #165 harrypotter 8/23/22

A love Triangle by MickeyMac18

This is an 18+ sexual fan fiction about Draco Malfoy. It all started on TikTok and I'm moving the whole story here for everyone to enjoy. It's the start of a new year at hogworts, your 4th year to be exact. You walk into the dinning hall and see Draco who you have had a crush on since your first year. But he doesn't know you exists, even though you are both in Slytherin. But this year is going to be different. This year you have decided you are ready to try out for the quidditch team which he is the captain of. But you first have to make it through the week and try to get him to notice you.

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-------------------------------------------- His breathing was even as he whispered to her, "Run. Get away from me. Run before I break you too. Please let me keep you alive, let me die while believing you lived", he whispered against her lips as she sat on his lap on the chair. "If you fucking die, I will kill them. I will kill every single one of them if they had failed you. Say the name and they're dead. I will not hesitate to shove their blood onto your hands. Their deaths will be at your feet. You get yourself killed and I'll drop the bodies at your grave." Her thumb went over his cheekbones as she cupped his cheek. He had cheekbones sharp enough that could sever a girl's heart. "Who will you kill? There is none that I care about anymore", she whispered back, her voice hoarse. --------------------------------------------- Will not go after the same plotline as the Harry Potter books by J.K. ROWLING. The characters belong to her. Character Lorenzo Berkshire belongs to -babynaomi here on Wattpad.

One Night - Drarry by gazingnightsinlove

Harry gets caught in a attempt of suicide with the last person he expected to see in the Room of Requirements after the fire incident. Draco Malfoy. "I'm a mess." Draco said "I think that we're both a mess." Harry replied and looked into the beautiful set of eyes. smut central and a LOT of sad emotions, if you feel like crying or something. I think ima add some fluff too. Read to find out more ;) NEITHER HARRY NOR DRACO WILL DIE IN THIS STORY! (I hate stories where they kill off one of the main characters.) 6 are there with more than 1300 words (each) PS, I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THESE CHRACTERS AND THE COVER ART. I ALSO SUCK AT Synopsis LOL ⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ *eating disorder *abuse of all kinds *colourful language usage *Self harm *depression *smut *LGBTQ+ community based((so homophobics please stay away, i hate people who use words like fag and shit, DONT YOU DARE READ THIS , i love and live by LGBTQ and i won't let anyone harm this beautiful society! )) ALSOO, i am not very good with spellings of certain magical things that i WILL FIX but please bear with me .

Slytherin sparks by jasmineelizabeth19

"Get on your fucking knees Iris." ---------- "You... don't ... know ... what ... it's ... like." He breathed between each stroke, "being ... inside you... I'd rather die... than never... feel this again." ---------- "Well how do I look?" Iris teased as she span around in front of him. He took her hand with a smirk, "Like you belong to me." ---------- ~ draco malfoy x OC ~ filthy love story of two seven year slytherins ~ ~ mature readers only, contains lots of spice and dark themes~ ~ contains toxic possessive behaviours which may be triggering ~ credit for characters and universe to JK Rowling

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Lost Memories // Drarry

"You're such a prick! I knew you hadn't really changed. You're just back to your old ways, torturing me." Harry can still feel Draco's hand around his arm. Their breath mingles as Harry's eyes rove around Malfoy's face. "You probably enjoy it too." "Immensely." They're so close that Harry could count Draco's eyelashes if he wanted to. "You're the worst," Harry gasps out between breaths. His heartbeat pounds overwhelmingly loud in his ears as he loses his senses. His eyes drop to Draco's lips again, and he swallows loudly, interrupting the silence that is only filled with the sound of their heavy breathing. "Fuck you Malfoy." ---- Harry is tired of being enemies with Draco. He has more important things to worry about. The most pressing of those being his real enemy, Voldemort, who is now at large. And then Draco starts acting suspicious and Harry wants to know the truth. He always tries to believe the best in people, but Harry is starting to wonder if there is any good left in Draco at all. ---- Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or any of the characters. Complete!