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I'm Fed Up
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Complete, First published Sep 16, 2015
This story is quite graphic... Unsolved domestic brutal murder and kind of non consensual cannibalism.
.... That being said it's a good but dark (in a light hearted way) fic, with murderer getting away with it and rubbing it in the authorities faces without them realising.

This was for a writing assessment, short crime story based on Roald Dahl's 'Lamb to the slaughter.'
Constructive feedback is always welcome.

It would be appreciated if you posted a comment just so I know my audience. 
- Thanks for reading.
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