I'm Fed Up
- Reads 24
- Votes 0
- Parts 1
Complete Thu, Sep 17, 2015<5 mins
This story is quite graphic... Unsolved domestic brutal murder and kind of non consensual cannibalism.
.... That being said it's a good but dark (in a light hearted way) fic, with murderer getting away with it and rubbing it in the authorities faces without them realising.
This was for a writing assessment, short crime story based on Roald Dahl's 'Lamb to the slaughter.'
Constructive feedback is always welcome.
It would be appreciated if you posted a comment just so I know my audience.
- Thanks for reading.
All Rights Reserved
#7
unsolvedmurder
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Let Me Switch Places
It has been 5 years. 5 years since she fell in love with him. With this asshole that she hates and loves at the same time. No particular reason for this obsession. Maybe just a bit of Stockholm syndrome. What if... We switch places ? -------------------------------------- I wrote this short fanfiction for Nika, a.k.a my best friend. This fiction contain a lot of references from songs I love and also from shows like Hannibal. This is mostly angst and two broken persons getting together, sour but comforting. (This story turned darker than I expected.) ⚠️ This fiction contains : blood, violence, torture, kidnapping, mental illness, body shaming, cannibalism, alcohol, murders, smoking... I am not promoting any of these actions but this is the point of the story so if anyone is against it, you can already leave. ⚠️Complete
Bloody Kuckles
~"YOU KNOW AND YOU DID NOTHING" " I didn't know anything a swear" ~"After all this time! after all, i have told you?!?! you used me! YOU only married me for BENEFIT didn't you?!" "no.. i...just" ~"Just what?! afraid?! Scared?!, you never loved me!," "Hey, hey listen, I didn't know anything, I didn't plan it, I was just about ten to 13 years old when it happened." ~" I WAS ALSO 13! your family would have known you were getting married to the last survive to the people the massacred!" In a story of Backstabbing, adultery, and love will Rowen pay for his crimes or live a happy like as part of a trouple with riches and luxury?
Rod - The Weapon
Are there people like 'good murderers' and 'bad murderers'? Because in this story, there will definitely be a battle about it. Are supposedly 'good murderers' let off the hook? Why? After all they did kill someone right? Aiden Quinnell, a decently middle aged man, lost his wife to cancer recently. During his most darkest time, two college boys appear in his life. They turn the isolated depressed life into a cheerful one. They have the intentions of popularizing the story of Aiden's late wife Rachel, who seems to be a mysterious figure, meddling with everyone's lives. Both, the husband and wife were detectives, determined to solve the case of a killer amongst their own society. However each close lead turn into a dead end. This unfortunately makes them register the case as unsolved. Rachel was always a mysterious figure in Aiden's life, even though he fell in love with her during their college days together. She always seemed to have this manipulative control over him, but you couldn't call it toxic. Aiden was always in his senses when he did something for her. They both really were pillar opposites, he believed in law and justice, while she believed that if a job was done for the right causes it could be excused. Keeping all of this aside, this is Rachel's incomplete, yet Aiden's complete story. He finds closure, in the process of telling the mystery of the unsolved case. He finds the strength to heal his broken self in the process, after all, without Rachel he felt blind, deaf and dumb. As if his world disappeared in a snap of fingers. After reading all of this, what are you waiting for?? Jump right into the story, for this is a one which has all of the answers to Aiden's questions, moreover, your questions!! Timeline - (2024-2025) Back story Timeline - (2014-2015) It would be amazing if you encouraged me by leaving votes and comments. Do follow for updates!! The best rank that this book got: #1 in whodiditComplete
𝐀𝐦𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐚 (Ticci Toby x FEM reader)
𝘐𝘯 2013, 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘸 𝘛𝘰𝘣𝘺. 𝘏𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘶𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘦𝘥 𝘲𝘶𝘪𝘦𝘵 𝘬𝘪𝘥 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘱𝘪𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘧𝘶𝘯. 𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘥𝘦𝘤𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘥, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘯𝘦𝘹𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘩𝘦'𝘴 𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘦 𝘯𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘣𝘰𝘳𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘪𝘴 𝘣𝘶𝘳𝘯𝘵 𝘥𝘰𝘸𝘯. 𝘈 𝘥𝘦𝘤𝘢𝘥𝘦 𝘭𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳, 𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙙𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪... 𝘽𝙪𝙩 𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙣𝙤 𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙖 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙧𝙚... I'm not gonna so a TW because you should know what you're getting into if you're reading the damn thing. Anyways, I've been thinking of writing this for months now and I'm finally going to do it. There may or may not be a little 🍋 in this... I'll try to update it at least once a week, but during the summer I'll get to write at least once every couple days. Enjoy <3 ૮₍ ˃ ⤙ ˂ ₎ა ૮₍'｡ᵔ ꈊ ᵔ｡₎ა ૮₍｡ •᎔• ｡₎ა ૮꒰˵• ﻌ •˵꒱ა ૮₍⑅˶•▿•˶⑅₎ა ૮๑ˊᯅˋ๑ა ૮₍ '𖦹 ˕ ×' ₎ა ૮₍ - ⤙ - ₎ა ૮₍ ˃ ⤙ ˂ ₎აComplete
Incommensurable Kindness
A geneticist looking for the perfect solution, a biologist searching for the ultimate cure, a scholar pursuing the path of happiness. Three young lives with noble intentions who chose to follow the way of kindness for different reasons. Yet, kindness can take many forms. For some, kindness is found in the small, fleeting acts of goodness, a reminder of the pure, social nature of every precious human. For others, kindness is found in ensuring the best possible future for the incoming generations, even if it means crushing the present between the hands of progress. For the rarest of minds, however, kindness implies destruction, the sacrifice of everything for the sake of a brand new better world. Will they encounter change their mind? Will they accomplish their mission? Will they regret the choices they have made so far? Some believe that even the tiniest pebble thrown in the river of life can irreversibly shape the flow of existence in unpredictable ways, but can a ripple truly change the world? [TW: blood, violence, suicide, abuse, self-harm, ...] [Complete but in revision! :) ] Additional information: -This story is written in so many various contexts and rarely read again with the necessary attention. Hence, we humbly ask for forgiveness for all the eventual grammar aberrations and incoherences you may find. :( -Needless to say, everything you are going to read is pure fiction and the characters are all born from our minds. :) -This book also touches topics related to trauma and mental health. We tried to be as respectful as possible, but please feel free to reach out to us if you find anything inappropriate! Also... thank you for choosing our story. It means a lot to us! We really hope you will appreciate our story as much as we have enjoyed writing it. :) Well then, dear reader, welcome to this little world of ours! Enjoy!!
𝗗𝗜𝗦𝗔𝗣𝗣𝗘𝗔𝗥 (Ticci Toby x Male Reader)
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘢 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘶𝘯𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭 𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘱... 𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘵 𝘥𝘰𝘦𝘴𝘯'𝘵 𝘦𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘱𝘢𝘳t. You're a lonely burnt out writer who can't find the ending to the novel you're writing, but when an unstable man comes to your front door step, but it turns out he's not who he says he is. 𝘉𝘶𝘵 𝘸𝘦 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘦𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘵𝘴. I finally made a ticci toby x male fanfiction. btw this is when toby is 30 and I TRIED TO STICK TO CANON. 👍 I just write off the top of my head and hope it ends well, so hopefully the plot goes hard. Also I want to mention that this probably won't be a very healthy relationship, and it's somewhere between gay and bromance, so you decide. (Go check out my other posts and consider following for more, hehe)Complete
Who Killed Markiplier?
"Tonight was about friends. Tonight was about fun. Finishing your drink, you laughed and followed the others to the poker table. Yes, tonight was definitely going to be fun." After receiving an invite to Poker Night, you head to Markiplier Manor for a night of fun and reuniting with old friends as well as making new ones. However, things take an unexpected twist once morning comes. You, along with all your friends, are thrust into a race against the clock to solve this murder mystery before the killer strikes again. Nobody is safe, and nobody can be trusted. [This story will start by following the Who Killed Markiplier? storyline, but will eventually stray until most of it is different and new. I am writing this because I have fallen in love with literally every character and I need a fanfic but there aren't any lengthy ones out yet, so here I am. Updates might be frequent, or they might be painfully slow, it all depends on my work schedules and my motivation. Feel free to point out any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors. Thank you all for reading my story and I hope you enjoy!]Complete
Finding Jack: 1888 in Whitechapel
In a reality not too unlike our own, the hunt for Jack the Ripper was in full swing. However, what if in this reality he happened to be caught? "One small change can do a lot", a wise man once said, and nothing is more true. In this reality, things were different in the Metropolitan Police which would see a big impact in their investigation: women could, too, be employed as police officers. Will this make an impact? Perhaps you should take a peek... ~~~ This Short Story is an adaptation of 'Catching Jack the Ripper' made by StoneRaptor7598 who kindly let me put a swing on things in my own version. Please make sure to go read the original version!! Highest Rankings: 26 - #Murders 347 - #Police 641 - #London 216 - #Brandon 140 - #InvestigationComplete
Bittersweet | Ticci Toby
◤━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━◥ Bittersweet /ˈbɪt̬.ɚˌswiːt/ (adj.) "containing a mixture of happiness and sadness" ◣━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━◢ DISCONTINUED A series of unfortunate events determine you to want to pluck a certain goggled male's eyes out. He seems to enjoy the dynamic between the two of you. Do you? If you're looking for one of those classic old fashion creepypasta fanfics with a disgusting amount of swearing, but with no cringe slendermansion, look no further this is it. TW: MAJOR gore and blood warning, swearing, stalking, murder, lots of death, angst, mental illness, lots of bad decisions 🙏 (Female!ReaderxYandere! Ticci Toby) enemies to lovers Slenderverse AU
Twisted Obsession
He was mysterious, unreadable, cold and expressionless. Something about him drew her to him and it interest her. Perhaps it interest her a little bit too much until.... "I will rip that pretty little face of yours off and eat it. NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!!" ( PLEASEEE I DONT EVEN LIKE HOW THIS STORY WAS EXECUTED OUT!! 😕 Mature, Psychotic and down right nasty content. Sorry for messups. )Complete
It has been 5 years. 5 years since she fell in love with him. With this asshole that she hates and loves at the same time. No particular reason for this obsession. Maybe just a bit of Stockholm syndrome. What if... We switch places ? -------------------------------------- I wrote this short fanfiction for Nika, a.k.a my best friend. This fiction contain a lot of references from songs I love and also from shows like Hannibal. This is mostly angst and two broken persons getting together, sour but comforting. (This story turned darker than I expected.) ⚠️ This fiction contains : blood, violence, torture, kidnapping, mental illness, body shaming, cannibalism, alcohol, murders, smoking... I am not promoting any of these actions but this is the point of the story so if anyone is against it, you can already leave. ⚠️
More detailsContent Guidelines