Game Time
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MatureOngoing17m
Last published Thu, Sep 17, 2015
This is the short story I am currently working on for class. I'm not sure where it is heading yet, but I would love some feedback again.
I can't even tell you what it is about without spoiling what I think I am going for here, so all I can say is this: Game Time is basically capture the flag on crack.
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