How New Moon should have ended....
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Last published Sat, Aug 20, 2016
How many of you are disappointed with the twist in the Breaking Dawn that Jacob imprints Bella's daughter?
How many of you had your hearts broken with the love triangle between Edward, Bella and Jacob when we all know in our hearts that Jacob and Bella were never meant together?
So here I am with my own version of New Moon as to how it should have ended. Obviously, there's no love story between Jacob and Bella and they remain true friends. And there's no Renesme either as Bella is turned into Vampire before...... maybe I should stop here. Read how it goes in the book.
The chapters are short too. This my first time writing a fan fiction so don't mind my plain writing skills.. ;)
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