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The nit-picking of My Immortal.

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Me commenting on the infamously bad fanfic that spread laughter, head-aches, and other joys all around. Expect almost every sentence to be commented on. Ladies and gentleman; Goffs and prepz... Yet another my immortal commentary that graces the internet.

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original my beloved evelyn ~ fred weasley by xssunflowerrx

all rights to Harry Potter belong to JK Rowling. I do not own the majority of these characters. Evelyn Malfoy is the oldest daughter of the Malfoy family. She was a student of Beauxbatons but was expelled and began attending Hogwarts with Fred Weasley as classmate, whom she'd avoided as her family hated his and she felt a need to do so aswell. The two both disliked one another and teased the other and somehow, slowly but surely, grew to be friends and through the years began to be more. The two (and George of course) go through the plot lines of Harry Potter while having their own story together. (possible) trigger warnings: language, physical violence, drinking please comment if anything in this story requires a tw that I've missed started: december 27th, 2020 completed: april 30th, 2021 editing started: october 10th, 2021 ended: stopped © xssunflowerrx {2020}

WRAPPING CHAOS - Finished by Mirabella_29

Draco Malfoy is a fucking arse. A magical delivery error causes all the gifts ordered by Draco and Hermione to be sent in the wrong place. To her great misfortune, her erotic potion books and sex toys land in Malfoy's hands, who takes great pleasure in mocking her. Bloody Hell, if she could bury herself alive right now, she would. ______________ I've had a few ideas pop into my head for the Christmas holidays, so here's a little surprise for you. Just a quick heads-up: writing smut is a real challenge for me-I cringe every single time, haha. I wrote my first one not long ago, and I thought I was going to have a heart attack when I posted it. So, please be kind! English isn't my first language, either. Sending lots of good vibes your way, and... happy reading! A special shoutout to my friend and beta, Posie.rosie.daisie, who took the time to read my work, even when I wanted to hide behind a cushion, and who advised me to keep a bowl of water nearby to help ease the pressure... Your unwavering support, your feedback, and your comments always bring a big smile to my face.

But Father I Love Him - A Drarry Fanfic by withluvchloemarie

*This Fanfic is a hot mess in desperate need of a rewrite. full of plot holes and missing details (READ AT YOUR OWN RISK) I WILL be doing a rewrite within the next 2-3 months but until then...you've been warned* He was chaos, he was revelry...Harry Potter's life takes a sharp turn the moment he's sorted into Slytherin. Gone is the golden boy the wizarding world expects, replaced by a sharp-tongued, chaos-driven troublemaker who finds himself surrounded by cunning housemates and unexpected alliances. Draco Malfoy doesn't know what to make of Harry-Slytherin's newest enigma with a knack for testing Draco's perfect Malfoy image. Their bickering is genuine, their arguments cutting, and yet, something about Harry's rebellious smirk and defiant attitude keeps Draco coming back for more. Over seven years at Hogwarts, Harry slowly dismantles the walls Draco's family has built around him. But as Draco's feelings grow, so does the pressure from his father, Lucius Malfoy, to stay in line and keep Harry at arm's length. Draco can't choose his family-or so he thinks. When it all comes to a head, and the world sees the truth, Draco finds himself standing before his father with one final defiance: "But Father, I love him." A slow-burn enemies-to-lovers romance filled with biting banter, explosive arguments, and a love so undeniable it shakes the foundations of the Malfoy name. *I don't own Harry Potter*

Entrapment | Draco Malfoy by malfoysho

Draco Malfoy love story. Friendship, smut, love, hate, trauma, broken hearts. MATURE CONTENT! 15+ ~ "You make me feel like I'm stuck, Emelia! Like I'm never going to be able to live my life how I want to. You make me feel like I'm stuck with you and only you!" Draco yelled at me fiercely as tears welled up in my hazel eyes. "You don't mean that." I whispered, my stomach churning from the words he spat at me. "Like hell I don't." ~ Highest rankings🥰: #1 in DracoFanfic #1 in WizardingWorld #1 in HermioneGranger #1 in Hogwarts #2 in Hufflepuff #2 in Dracolovestory #3 in DeathlyHallows #3 in writing This book is complete/ in process of editing. Some characters belong to J.K. Rowling as well as some plot points.

Ghosts ✔️ by SettleDown1D

A postwar fic where Harry barely speaks anymore, and no one understands him the way Draco Malfoy does. One apologetic letter written by Draco will change the course of both of their lives. Mentions themes such as PTSD, trauma, and depression. Read with caution, but this will be a lighthearted fic for the most part. Mentions of modern day elements you've been warned! Cover made by @Dragonfirehyun ! I don't own the rights to Harry Potter or any aspects of the movies/stories, however I do own the rights to all ideas that I have come up with. Highest ranking: #1 Drarry - 6/9/21 #1 Drarryfanfic - 6/15/21 #1 Dracoxharry - 6/15/21 #1 Harry - 8/22/21 Started: May 17th, 2021 Completed: July 24th, 2021 Milestones: 200K - October 11th, 2021 300K - January 14th, 2022 400K - April 24th, 2022 500K - July 24th, 2022 600K - October 21st, 2022 700K - February 14th, 2023 800K - May 30, 2023

Lucius Malfoy Is My Husband by Pastas-Are-Creepy

I do not take credit for this!! By Elpin on fanfiction.net

An Unhealthy Addiction (Draco X Reader) by Honeyyyyybear

I had always been dating Harry. Or I had known I should be dating him, so that's what I did. I didn't ever feel any feeling towards anyone else other than him. And it was because they were forced. That was until Malfoy, Stupid Draco Malfoy. This fan fic does have language in it so If you are not comfortable in that please don't read. Also, I may get some things mixed up and they will not all be from the book. I will make some stuff up. I will do the best that I can but I am very sorry if I leave something out or if I get something wrong.

Avoiding the End || Malfoy *discontinued* by merakifreedom

Not my best kind of works. Please read my other Fanfictions instead: Birth of Hell || Riddle Draco's Revival || Malfoy *Discontinued* "It was beautiful how broken they both were. Beaten down by their own families, and cursed on the streets by their rich blood. They had no choice, they had no chance, and they for damn sure had no reason to live." ••• Featured in the official Harry Potter Fanfiction Reading List since Oct. 1, 2015 ••• What other readers think of the story: "I really like this! You did an awesome job of showing a different perspective of Draco without changing his character. Your writing is amazing - it's a good mix of descriptions of dialogue and makes me want to read more! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)" ~ @kyliejab "This story is amazing. I really love it so far and it's different to any other Draco fanfict I've read." ~ @ItsMeChevy "I love the different outlook on Slytherin and just this story in general is amazing!!" ~ @ThatOneSlytherin "This was...INCREDIBLE! :D I love how you captured Draco in a new light, showing the unseen and untold feelings of him. ♥" ~ @1DizzleLand ••• All characters and settings belong to J.K Rowling except for additional (obvious) things. This is strictly fanfiction. Cover Photo Credits: Brooke Shaden

The Girl Who Lived (Draco Malfoy x OC) by missingn0te

"Must be tough, everyone loves you, don't they? So goddamn perfect. They don't see it but I do, Potter. I can see straight through you." "And what do you see, Malfoy?" "That you're a mess, aren't you?" She stared at him, rivalling his own expressionless mask. "You're the first person to say that to me." "Well of course," he swung a leg, pacing around her lazily. "Everyone is too busy seeing the hero, but when you hate someone enough, you see their flaws, their weaknesses." Her mask fell and she smiled to herself. "So you hate me?" She said, playfully. "Of course, isn't that what we do, hate each other?" The smile grew enough for dimples to appear. "I guess so." "So yes, I hate you." "I hate you too," she smiled. Draco couldn't help it, his lips tugged slightly at the corners while laughter stayed restrained in his glimmering eyes. "Good, I'm glad that's established," Draco announced. "We hate each other." --------------------------- A miserable childhood of neglect, Harper Potter needed someone to teach her the ability to love in order to overcome the darkest wizard of all time. She just wasn't expecting that someone to be the guy who taunted her every quidditch match. Featuring. Female Harry x Draco

A Snake's Crutch Book 1 by Emmanem24

Y/N is a muggle born. All her life she had been taught normal things. But when her Hogwarts letter arrives, she can't help but be giddy with excitement. She meets a few new friends along the way, one including a Malfoy. Though all her newfound friends seem to despise him, y/n can't help but like him. In a friendly way of course (or so she thinks). From the first moment in Madame Malkin's shop, y/n has known she needed to get to know him. To tell apart the rumors from reality. Y/N is going through her Hogwarts experience the same as everyone else. Except she has a much different perspective than the one already told. Make this your adventure and see how things unfold. Disclaimer: I, writing this book, in no way take credit for any of JK Rowling's amazing story. I give her full credit for the idea as it only came to be from her own Harry Potter. Most Impressive Ranking: 112nd in #fangirl out of 24.4k 🥇 Winner of The Sorting: Reader Inserts 1st in #theboywhohadnochoice 3rd in #slytherinprince 12th in #mudblood 12th in #dracolovestory 19th in #dracofanfic Cover Credit to @Ravenclaw3117

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original my beloved evelyn ~ fred weasley cover

WRAPPING CHAOS - Finished cover

But Father I Love Him - A Drarry Fanfic cover

Entrapment | Draco Malfoy cover

Ghosts ✔️ cover

Lucius Malfoy Is My Husband cover

An Unhealthy Addiction (Draco X Reader) cover

Avoiding the End || Malfoy *discontinued* cover

The Girl Who Lived (Draco Malfoy x OC) cover

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original my beloved evelyn ~ fred weasley

all rights to Harry Potter belong to JK Rowling. I do not own the majority of these characters. Evelyn Malfoy is the oldest daughter of the Malfoy family. She was a student of Beauxbatons but was expelled and began attending Hogwarts with Fred Weasley as classmate, whom she'd avoided as her family hated his and she felt a need to do so aswell. The two both disliked one another and teased the other and somehow, slowly but surely, grew to be friends and through the years began to be more. The two (and George of course) go through the plot lines of Harry Potter while having their own story together. (possible) trigger warnings: language, physical violence, drinking please comment if anything in this story requires a tw that I've missed started: december 27th, 2020 completed: april 30th, 2021 editing started: october 10th, 2021 ended: stopped © xssunflowerrx {2020}