The Comedown
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  • Parts 8
  • Time 1h 58m
Ongoing, First published May 18, 2011
Delilah Carmichael loved cars. Ever since she was young, and her dad taught her how to fix them up. And the thing she loved most is what became her downfall. Her dad died when she was 15, from liver disease. Seeing him like that for the last few weeks was the hardest thing she ever had to endure. Her mother was a pill abuser. Her father had an inheritance that went to her when she was to become 16 and 6 months of age. He knew his wife had changed, and did all he could during his last days, to make sure his little girl didn’t have to suffer through her mother’s misery and cruelty. 
When she came of age, she got the money and took off. She decided to lay low until her seventeenth birthday. Because at 17 she was legally an adult and would be able to register for school. During the six months she “laid low”, she joined a street racing team. They called her “The Executioner” because she executed her moves on the road flawlessly. And later the name had been shortened to “X”. She was well known. A little too well known. One month before her birthday, a racing meet she was at, had been busted. Everyone got in their cars and hauled ass for fear of being arrested. A girl had been left behind and her ride too far gone to turn back. Delilah took pity on her and tried to escape with her as well. She took too much time going back for the girl, and ended up being caught. 
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Lustful Revulsion (wlw)

45 parts Complete Mature

"You're a headfuck, a complete headfuck." Red's back is turned as she breathes before heavy raindrops meet her face. "Where is this coming from?" Layla asks out of confusion as she attempts to pull Red by the wrist when Red pulls away quickly. "Don't- don't touch me." Red's voice comes out as a low raspy tone as she towers over Layla, brown meeting green. "Why?" Layla asks, gulping. "Because if you touch me, i'm scared i won't be able to hold back." Red hesitantly speaks as raindrops slide off her face and fall onto Layla's. "Then let me." _____ Reagan Levine and Layla Elsher are high school students in Northern England. The pair grew up with a large dislike for one another's existence purely out of spite. Reagan, also known as Red, grew up with only a father in an abusive home, having no mother or siblings makes her fend for herself in other ways.. ways you wouldn't call legal for a student. Red has despised Layla for the entirety of her being due to the sheer fact she has everything she wants, and maybe even more than that.. Layla Elsher has hated Red because she sees her as nothing but a bully. Not knowing why Red has turned out the way she is leads everyone to make their own perceptions of her intimidating manners when operating around others. Layla is popular and known to any man kind, the boys drool all over her and she loves it. It's the final year of high school for both of these girls, they're enemies since they could remember, but wait and see as Revulsion becomes Lustful throughout their last year of school..