Seeker and Spirit
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This is one of the first stories I'm getting serious with. I enjoy getting criticism so rant away at the story so I know what to fix. Also please bear the first couple chapters. They were the first thing I've ever written in the past four to five years. I have to say that chapter three is where the improvement in writing shows a little.
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