Visions of Fire [EDITING]

Hey guys! So this is a short story that I wrote for an english project. We had to write a narrative that follows the "hero's journey archetype" and this is what I came up with.

Margaret Langdale is an ordinary 17 year old girl in Manhattan when her mom disappears and she discovers something that will change both of their lives. But is it for better or for worse? Follow Margaret through her adventure to find her family, and herself in a world she never knew existed.