On The Sidewalk Bleeding

On The Sidewalk Bleeding

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Ongoing11m

Last published Fri, Sep 25, 2015

OKAY!!!!! This is a short story I had to write in my grade nine LA class the other day. She hasn't even marked it yet. We had to take the original story, but completely change it to a different point of view. So instead of the bleeding, dying character, Andy, I chose to write in the cop's perspective. I chose him since he only had two lines in the story, therefore I thought I could do completely anything with him! Please leave feedback. (:

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There comes a time in everyone's life when they are faced with a difficult choice. For most people, following your instincts is easy. You know what to do, and you know what not to do. But what if you were faced with a choice that is just not that simple. When your instincts tell you one thing, but your heart tells you something else. I was faced with just such a choice. While driving down a deserted highway. I saw a car on the side of the road. Not just a car, a police car. We all know the police are trained to take care of themselves, so I drove past without stopping, but something didn't feel right. What would you have done? **This is a first draft. Please excuse any mistakes there may be. Please do not comment any corrections. I will fix them when I do the rewrite. This is also my first attempt at first person point of view so please bear with me.**

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