OKAY!!!!! This is a short story I had to write in my grade nine LA class the other day. She hasn't even marked it yet. We had to take the original story, but completely change it to a different point of view. So instead of the bleeding, dying character, Andy, I chose to write in the cop's perspective. I chose him since he only had two lines in the story, therefore I thought I could do completely anything with him! Please leave feedback. (:All Rights Reserved