FunPark Mystery

This is my first upload ever, so I hope you like it. It's about a teenage boy who goes to a kiddy theme park for his Sister's birthday. He goes to the hotel, and when he wakes up, everyone has disappeared. It's a five minute read and everything ties together at the end. This was an 8th grade project, and it had a four page limit. I would have liked to go a little (a lot) more in depth. Maybe if I get enough comments i'll remake it with a less corny plot.