Allegiant's "Actual" Ending
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This is an alternate ending to Allegiant to replace the tragic original.
I’ve used as much original material possible and what I can to make it the best it can be. I think I’ve succeeded in making sure everything is as realistic, for the characters, as possible and given closure.
I love Divergent and I hope you'll love my version of the end of the book.
I pick up right from chapter 47 of the original story to make life easier for all readers.
Wow, my first "story". I'm nervous.
--Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters or the story. All rights go to Veronica Roth--
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