Labyrinth 2: Return of the Goblin King (complete)(Editing)

(Under editing. Came to my attention, some of my chapters are no longer here, so I apologize if this book is confusing!)
I created this idea around a young age when I first watched the movie and I did NOT like the ending but to be fair I was young and only wanted the sexy man (and not thinking about the kid.. opps) Down the road, when I was in middle school and started getting more invested into writing.
(EDIT: The unedited/ editing versions are very... Thank you for the love and support!)
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-I DO NOT own the characters Sarah, Jareth, Toby, Mizumi, Drumlin and Moulin (Two daughters), or the little cloud that shows up in story.
-I DO own the characters of Blue and Shadow (own goblin), Buck (Realm Lord and Jareth's oldest friend.)
-I got this idea while reading other forms of The Labyrinth story lines; and I got the idea of my Fanfic by the manga, Return of the Labyrinth- Author: Jake T. Forbes, Illustrator: Chris Lie (Cover Art By: Kouyu Shurei) Publisher: Madman Entertainment (Australia and New Zealand)
Tokyopop (North America) (2006-2010)
-So overall, I DO OWN the rights to original characters (Blue, Shadow, Buck, (And the other Realm Lord that doesn't show in this book), The nameless antagonist, The Crystal Heart (The effects and powers), (The Ice Queen Powers, Goblin King Powers, etc.)