Divide
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Last published Sat, May 4, 2013
In the future, life is a privilege.
Sixteen year-old Merit Overseer is only sure of one thing in his life: that he will not live another year. In his dystopian country of Control, being sixteen means you are required to take a hellish test called the Division, a test designed to discover the few people worthy of being citizens. After the Collapse destroyed the rest of the world, the few survivors realized the cause of the downfall of nations was in fact the fault of their own greedy citizens. And the Division was created. The rules of the test are simple: you pass, and you live. You fail, and you are executed.
Merit has long feared the day his Division would come, but now it is here. He knows he will not, but he is determined to make it back, for his family. All he has left. However, Merit has something special. Something the country has never seen. And he is not the only one who possesses it.
But nothing will happen as expected. Lives will be lost, love will be born and tested, and one choice will change Control forever.
*THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT, PROBABLY NEEDS MAJOR REVISION.*
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I've never been able to taste fear before, but I do now, it lingers in the air. Like a flame. Kindled by the president, fed by the citizens, and I'm the one who has to put it out. The extinguisher? Possibly my life. κ§ .γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ». κ§ In a world where expressing emotions are illegal and can lead to execution, everything seems perfect. All the countries and their citizens are efficient, orderly and obedient, and nobody seems to question the rules. But Ada Alexander struggles to keep her emotions hidden and she discovers more and more feelings that most humans have forgotten long ago, love, grief, anger, pain and fear. When the system glitches and she is able to cry for the first time ever, she feels tricked and robbed by the government, becomes inspired and develops a revolutionary plan to break the system so people can feel once again, and her family worries for her life. But will her death and discoveries be worth it? ππ£ π¬ππππ π π©πππ£ πππππ©π¨ ππ€π§ πππ§ ππͺπ©πͺπ§π πππ£ππ§ππ©ππ€π£'π¨ π§ππππ© π©π€ ππ’π€π©ππ€π£π¨ ππ£ π ππ§π€π ππ£ π¬π€π§π‘π. Highest rank achieved: #3 in #dystopianfuture Warning: Suicide, violence, gore, self-harm and mature language. I will be publishing many chapters, each chapter has three parts, all published separately at different times. If you have any feedback, please feel free to share it with me, I love feedback! β‘ Cover by: @rose_anselina Tysm Lea, go check out her cover shop please! [Completed] Word count: 50146 Words Original Fictional Novel Β© walkeralyssayeohxoxo | 2021 Β© All Rights Reserved Started - 25th November 2020 Finished - 26th April 2021Complete
The Altered.
guys please don't read this anymore lmao i write totally differently nowπ _________________ In a future where humans are genetically modified -- 'altered' -- at the age of sixteen, the world has been, until now, a safe place. Without changing a person's personality, undergoing the Alteration perfects their appearance, IQ, and even their immunity to diseases. No human passes the age of sixteen without being Altered. In the blink of an eye, things change. An ominous message is sent out to all of those below the age of sixteen, providing precise instructions that suggest they flee. Simultaneously, a deadly virus starts to spread all about the world, attacking only the Altered -- every human over the age of sixteen. The virus eats at the modified human brain, and soon the Unaltered begin to realise that the Altered are losing their minds. Home is no longer safe. Friends and family turn on one another, losing control of their own minds and bodies. The Unaltered aren't safe. Even if the virus isn't attacking them, the ones with the virus are. Set on a pristine, futuristic Earth, this is the apocalypse like you've never seen it before. (Rated mature for graphic depictions of violence and mild language.) Banner credit to @itsnothardtodreamx 1st Place winner in the 2020 Spring Awards! Runner up in the 2020 Harmony Awards! 2nd place in the Belle AmΓ© Awards 2020! [This piece was originally for the Open Novella Contest 2020, but has now surpassed the length of a novella and is a novel.]Complete
The Revelation
In the beginning, there was death. The darkness flows from hues of purple and orange, the moon rising to kiss the sun's rays one last time as the darkest cloud of night I've ever seen falls over our tiny haven. I catch Will's face from the side of my vision and my heart tightens slightly. The tick of his jaw wouldn't be noticeable for anyone but me. His best friend, his lifeline. A solemn tear forms in my eye as he wipes his face, another tear falling for the family he lost. I love him. Utterly and desperately so, but, there's nothing I can do about that. The ultimate forbidden fruit, if you will. I reach to comfort him and he doesn't respond. I open my mouth to speak and he looks my way, but the gleam in his dark brown eyes hits the moonlight just right and I fall. My voice escapes my throat and I can't do it. I've tried for years to tell him. 10 years, actually. All this time, I hopelessly remained devoted to a ghost who had given the best of himself to a fiery red-head with a sassy personality and the body of a supermodel. For 10 years, I held to the desperate thought that maybe, just maybe, he'd be someone I could count on. Instead, I watched him marry my best friend, smiled as they welcomed their son. Stood, holding that beautiful boy as his mother was in the first round of executions after the beginning of the Revelation. Helped heal Will's wounds in the aftermath. Cried, clutching the tear-stained shirt of my best friend as his son took his last staggering breath in that first harsh winter. The guilt of my emotions crawl through me. My heart twisting in regret, guilt, desperation, and grief. I loved my best friend. She was so much more than that; she was my family. In this dystopian quick read, join a group of people desperate to recapture their freedom and end a tyrant's reign.Complete
I will find you
It was dark, wet, and cold, and they were tumbling. Around and around and around. Kate laid on her back stuck in her seatbelt when a figure came slowly toward her... So that's just a part from the book! It's basically about Kate that was in a car accident and lost her mom but her dad left and doesn't want anything to do with them. It was a miracle that she even survived. So now she lives with her Grandparents and her identical twin brothers, Jake and Joshua both 9, and her little sister Ashley, age 7. And basically, her five best friends Paisley, Sarah, Scarlett, Bella, and Emy. Now, Kate doesn't know how she got out of that car reck. But on the first day as a Junior, she is drawn to a mysterious guy who seems to know everything about her. Now, she is seeing a whole new world that no one has ever discovered before... Will she be able to discover these new powers and save the rest of those she loves?Complete
Submit (Book 1, The Karyln Trials)
*Completed* We are only a number... How would you feel if when you were born, your whole life was set in front of you? If how you were treated was all dependent on where in the year you were born? Well, welcome to Karyln, formerly known as the United States before World War three and four. In Karyln, parents try to plan pregnancies to end right around the first of the year because when you're born decides how the rest of your life will be. The first boy and girl born gets the number one, they are projected to receive the best life possible. The next boy and girl get the number two, and I think it's pretty easy to guess how the rest goes. The only thing standing between the elite society and their perfect lives, is The Trial. Every year, on the first of June, everybody who has or is having their eighteenth birthday joins. It's a race to the finish line in teams of four and you could either become a higher or lower number depending on when you reach the end. This was created in hope to give those with lower numbers a chance to climb up the ranks. The Trial then developed into more. Pairs of boys and girls with numbers one through thirty live, while the others with numbers of thirty-one and beyond are purged to maintain population control. Oh how our country loves to dig bigger holes for itself. My name is Adaline Grace, and I'm number twenty-two. ~~~~~~~~~~ Awards: 1st Place in The Creative Awards (Third Edition) 1st Place in The Astrologist Awards 2020 2nd Place in The Unknown Writers AwardsComplete
One Star Away
Prism isn't from this planet, this world of barren lands and metal cities. When she wakes to find her memories in scattered pieces, she knows two things: that her previous life is gone, and that she has a mission: Objective 16. With a mysterious voice inside her head guiding her, it seems simple to follow its instructions and fulfill her objective, but things get much more complicated as Prism starts to wonder why she has so much pain, why this pain seems to disappear around a certain human, and if the mysterious voice is a friend or foe. Tavis can handle this. He's Cyberless, living in the Dregs with his insane mom and running for his life every other day, but he can handle this...right? Each night, he secretly begs for a change, just a change in his awful life. When a new, strange girl appears at his school, he gets his wish. But is this change for better or worse? Jade will keep Prism safe and finish his objective at all costs. However, his objective seems anything but simple, especially when it means they must hide among humans, the cause of all his misfortune. And with Prism's sudden collapses and her struggles to remember her past, his problems and worries only seem to grow. But failure is not an option. He will fulfill their objective and nothing will get in his way.Complete
WERE TOO YOUNG <3
In a big city full of secrets . Teenagers living their life willing god damn it's their last year of high school . But it's all Maxi has ever known fear and honed from a young age to create her reality from her in-wakening dreams nobody can hide though . And run to a whole new place to meet new people that she will be sharing good memories with , Good vibes and quick soul counted a lot . After whole pandemic years full of stress and fear Out of unable to escape Maxi will found a place among the other at the school , will her past return to ruin the one chance he has to leave her life in the shadows "This time she won't trust in something as changeable as love. No, this time she'll have the power to protect herself." Has already lost everything once. And not going to lose again. No matter what the cost. WERE TOO YOUNG to live all that <3Complete
Divided
The world has changed. Lives have been sacrificed for the greater good. Mankind has evolved. In 2010 God's Hammer, wreaked havoc on the planet destroying 95% of the population. The skies now are heavy with ash and dust, making sunlight a rarity. The cause was unknown, but as a result, an element that lied dormant deep beneath the earth's crust rose to the surface. This element was Alcium. A living-metal, the first of its kind. This element was once thought to Boost the evolutionary process of mankind but now it's the only thing that is driving young Ryan Hawkins to survive. Ryan must undergo trial after trial to find his purpose and to find what truly is important in life. His mind, body, and spirit must all be aligned before he can take advantage of his life but if he fails to do so, the world won't be the only thing DIVIDED. Full book on amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Divided-Mr-Payton-L-Miller/dp/1542460484/ref=sr_1_14?ie=UTF8&qid=1532303853&sr=8-14&keywords=Divided%3A+The+Divided+SeriesComplete
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Apocalypse
There was a major war that happened and now the government is trying a new experiment on the city. The main character, Alex, and her best friends who are twins are seeing that something isn't right. They're seniors in high school but because of the war, they've been separated on government orders. No one is allowed outside because the government is making people to believe its toxic. They believe that if the parents believe it, the kids will too. But it doesn't stop Alex. She and her best friends decide that they are going to try and stop this. But how? They have no clue. But the first step, going outside. Is it truely toxic out there ? They're about to find out.Complete
I've never been able to taste fear before, but I do now, it lingers in the air. Like a flame. Kindled by the president, fed by the citizens, and I'm the one who has to put it out. The extinguisher? Possibly my life. κ§ .γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ»γ». κ§ In a world where expressing emotions are illegal and can lead to execution, everything seems perfect. All the countries and their citizens are efficient, orderly and obedient, and nobody seems to question the rules. But Ada Alexander struggles to keep her emotions hidden and she discovers more and more feelings that most humans have forgotten long ago, love, grief, anger, pain and fear. When the system glitches and she is able to cry for the first time ever, she feels tricked and robbed by the government, becomes inspired and develops a revolutionary plan to break the system so people can feel once again, and her family worries for her life. But will her death and discoveries be worth it? ππ£ π¬ππππ π π©πππ£ πππππ©π¨ ππ€π§ πππ§ ππͺπ©πͺπ§π πππ£ππ§ππ©ππ€π£'π¨ π§ππππ© π©π€ ππ’π€π©ππ€π£π¨ ππ£ π ππ§π€π ππ£ π¬π€π§π‘π. Highest rank achieved: #3 in #dystopianfuture Warning: Suicide, violence, gore, self-harm and mature language. I will be publishing many chapters, each chapter has three parts, all published separately at different times. If you have any feedback, please feel free to share it with me, I love feedback! β‘ Cover by: @rose_anselina Tysm Lea, go check out her cover shop please! [Completed] Word count: 50146 Words Original Fictional Novel Β© walkeralyssayeohxoxo | 2021 Β© All Rights Reserved Started - 25th November 2020 Finished - 26th April 2021
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