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Friends For Revenge
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В процессе, впервые опубликовано окт. 03, 2015
This is an old story that I had written a few years back. It's extremely cringy but I was hoping that some of you guys could give it a read and tell me if you would be interested in giving me some advice on what I should do to make the story better. I'm open to pretty much anything. I've actually tried (and failed) to make a revised version but it didn't really spark my interest enough (I'll be adding what I had written at the end, just in case you'd like to take some ideas from that as well). I'd just really appreciate some feedback on whether or not people would be interested in the story or not, and if you are, what you would like to see stay and/or change. Thanks for your time, and if you choose to read, make sure to be vocal! I promise I'll take everything into consideration!
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"I hate you," she muttered and I was taken aback. I looked at the guys for a quick second and back at her. "W-" "Don't ever scare me like that again," she said harshly, colliding with my body. I cringed hard and Erik pulled away so he wasn't in the middle of our embrace. I wrapped my arm around her tight waist and held her against me. I never planned on letting her go. Ever. "I'll try. I'll try for you," I whisper in her ear, my lips brushing against her skin. ~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{}~{} Rachel is a strong girl that has a strange past of stealing. She still owes some people money and now they want to kill her. She hides her identity away from these men. That doesn't necessarily mean that they don't know where she is though . . . Rachel has like Chase since sixth grade. He was super cute but he was such a player, even in middle school. She knew that he would just break her heart but she took a chance on him in her senior year. He isn't quite what she expected him to be towards someone like her. Chase is a tough cliche bad boy with a long line of fighting in the past only because he cared about his older brother and was trying to pay off his debt. Little did he know that the boss of his fights had a connection with Rachel. Chase had always seen Rachel as the nerdy girl that had a pretty face. He would've never thought that he would have a strong set of feelings towards her. She has shocked him in so many ways and he's sure that she will surprise him more in the future. These to completely different people are so much alike. What happens when Rachel falls for the bad boy again and Chase realizes Rachel as something more than a nerd? Read and find out! Hello fellow readers! I hope you're choosing this story and expecting something something good. Because, this is a good story but it just has some jumbled ideas. I'll be editing this once it is completed. Hope you enjoy!
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"You know you still want me." he said cockily. "As if!" I yelled at him. "I must say, I like the new look." he all but smirked. ************************** Alex was the shy, quiet nerd that nobody talked to. Although, she was shy at school she was quit loud, crazy , and pretty sarcastic. She just thought that nobody at school was worth her time. Damien was your typical cocky jock. He had the girls, the 'followers', and he was the captain of the soccer team. Now, you're probably wondering how they both fit in to the story. Well, they used to date. It just didn't end well. So, Alex now hates Damien. For the reason that he stole her heart and that he is, as she put it, "an egotistical asshole". ============================= Ok. So this is my first story I don't know how it will turn out. So, please comment and tell me how you think it's going. Oh and mild language.