In the past line

In the past line

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(im actually ran out of idea for the title) (sorry if my english or my story is like sh*t) This is my very first time writing a story . I just thought that i should give it a shot right ? well , i hope you guys enjoy read ... this... 'thing' "man, its already 25 years now. Dont you think we should do something about this ? " I said it as i lay my back on the worn out leather hammock. "fine. but what do you think we should do.. "he let out a big sigh. "fillin, i've been cursed, abadoned,hatred in this world longer than you can think of, we can still use that g.." "NO! YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT THAT FEIGN!... J-j-just dont dude..." with a soft voice and a sighs he said ;"same ol' same ol' fillin. you're the one who asked me anyway" "sorry dude i-i- just... sorry" i curl up my body so i don't had to face him with disappointment written all over his face sorry.... should we begin now~~
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Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?

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