a different kind of pain

*nothing to do with catrific*
this story is a very cheesy high school love story. just if you love cliche you'll love this (maybe)
this is an experiment, this story is my, like, third attempt at writing. EVER (if you read you'll probably see why) so i just feel like i should warn you also please tell me what are my flaws in writing so i can improve
THANKS! in advance