My childhood love( On Hold)

My childhood love or hatred...this story is all about two beautiful souls. From their childhood they care for each other, they worry for each other, they get possessive for each other, they fight with each other, they get angry on each other and and and yes they are deeply in love with each other. But as we say time always changes. Some tragedy happened in their life and two beautiful souls get separated from each other. Now they hate each other the most both of them now have only one goal in life and that is to destroy each other.In childhood itself they separated from each other but destiny plays its own game and again they met so what happened next if you want to know than read my story here i go enjoy the story.
Guys I am writing a story for the very first time so please give me your feedback regarding it. Criticism and suggestions are welcome.