Revelation (On Hiatus)

Revelation (On Hiatus)

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In the year 2359 Earth is no longer the way it used to be. All knowledge of the past has been lost ever since the "Black Out," the time period in which the world transformed and began to evolve down a completely different path. Everything has become artificial and on the verge of lifeless. It all happened when the president of the United States and all his executive followers suddenly disappeared. Not long after, several other of the world's leaders were neutralized and brought out of power. Soon BioMax emerged. A world-run company that excelled in all forms of technology and science. It didn't take long for BioMax to become the greatest power of the newly shaped world. But one very big problem has come to exist among this world of perfection. Half of the population lives in a world of flawlessness where as the other in poverty. Aria, a sixteen year old girl must choose between her life of luxury and one that goes against everything she always thought she believed in. As her feelings for her brother Leon and rebel Kai, become more and more complicated, she finds herself on the verge of making a decision she may regret. A/N- This will be edited within time and hopefully made to sound more interesting ._.
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