One lonely night...
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Last published Sun, Oct 11, 2015
The loneliest day and night of my life!
This is a full descriptive short(ish) story about one of the loneliest days i have ever had in my life. It starts with the beginning of the day before the set day.
Hopefully people understand that this isn't a creative writing but something that actually happened. And this is actually how i felt when everything was over, but i still feel that way now.
Please leave a comment. I would really appreciate it.
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