Affliction
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This was meant to be a story idea that kinda came out to be a poem; if it sucks, please just outright tell me and don't be euphoric - I want the cold, hard truth, and nothing but. Please enjoy.
Here's the intro;
Once Upon A Time,
there was a girl.
She was born into a privileged life.
Born into a family full of love.
Living life easy.
Yet the world around her was not like her life.
There were more kinds of suffering that she could see
then she had names for.
Through perfection,
she saw nothing but pain.
And it hurt her.
So from her utopia,
she prayed.
She prayed to take the pain from the world,
to have it all placed into her,
so that she,
with all the strength she'd gained from her loving life,
could take it away from those who had never experienced it.
She wanted to live through their hate.
Their lives.
So that they could learn what it is to be Compassionate.
Her prayers were answered.
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