The Visitor
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Last published Sun, Apr 21, 2013
She asked me to tell her my story so I did. Like it or not, it happened, it all happened as I told it. Every single thing that went wrong, every death, every love, everything, it all happened. And that's why I'm still in this jail, still in this hellhole being tortured. But I'm not sorry. I don't regret a second of anything. No, nothing... Nothing at all.
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𝑰 𝑫𝑰𝑫𝑵'𝑻 𝑫𝑰𝑬, 𝑰 𝑺𝑼𝑹𝑽𝑰𝑽𝑬𝑫.
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Thank you, For the venom
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"Dont you fucking dare go near her ever again" "i- it wasnt- just let me, please" "you were behind all of this, I don't want to see your face ever again, not near me or my family, understood?" "i- I am... " she almost broke down to tears. He was seething. "I am sorry. Just let me see her once" he mockingly laughed "in your dreams now only" she squared herself up and kept on hitting him only for him to throw her on the floor. ----------------- "stop, just stop right there please" he took two more steps towards her. "Don't do this to me, I love you please. " Her mind was in a haze. She couldn't place her words together. "I can't', after all of that I really can't. " She turned around and started to leave just when he pulled on her arm and pulled her closer to him. "I love you" he whispered in her ears sounding almost so broken "please don't go away" Even though it broke her heart a little she somehow managed to pull away from him "have a good day" ------------ he is the lone wolf, she is his only anchor she is the sun in his dark world he kneels before no one but she is his goddess what will happen when their path crashes?
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