Our Oath (Coming This Summer!)
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Last published Tue, Apr 16, 2013
He let go of one of my hands and tilted my chin back. “Let’s make a oath…”
“A oath?” I asked curiously.
“Yes, a oath,” he repeated. “You must promise to be strong for me while I am over there, you must promise me that you will never lose hope in us, and you must promise me that you will believe that every second of the day that I will be thinking about you and know that I am coming home to you when this is all over.”
“I promise,” I replied. “You must promise me that you will write, and you must promise me that while you are over there, please be careful.”
He chuckled lightly. “I promise.”
This was the beginning of what Lilly and Lucas thought was going to be the rest of their lives. They thought they were going to get to wake up and spend every day together... but others had different plans. Lucas was scheduled to be deported over seas in one month. Making their oaths on their graduation day, they went out to have the best summer they could before he left. Only their oath was to keep them together while he was gone... can they keep their promises?
I pulled him close to me again, wrapping my arms around his waist while laying my head on his toned chest. ‘This was my oath to you Lucas… I only hope you come home to me.”
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Instead of him
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I Can't Admit I Love You
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Promise
"You will no longer be called by the name of Promise. Your new name, in which everyone gets a new name- is Oath." He said it as though I was supposed to deal with it or the name was a burden. "Alright," I replied calmly. "Not too bad." His head shot around like an owl, his eyes full of confusion. "That's it? You're not... at all... I don't know, angry I just changed your name without permission?" I shrugged. "You're my captain now, are you not?" His confused face morphed into his sly grin as he said in that mysterious, stomach churning low tone, "And this is why I kept you. Welcome aboard, Oath." *************** Promise, an 18-year-old sailor, has her life flipped when a storm leads her to living with pirates, being separated from her father, and truths are unfolded to her as she finds out who she truly is... and everyone around her.Complete
"Okay, then allow me to offer a pact." He says, immediately making me a mixture of terrified and suspicious. "You say that I'm a jerk; a bully. So, why not change that my way?" "I don't like where this is going-" I begin, but he cuts me off. "Just listen." He comes closer, seating himself next to me on the curb. "You've made me lose 3 hot dates, and in my books, that's unforgivable. There was Bunny, the girl at the party, the red headed girl from Geometry, and that Grateful Dead hippy chick from the parking lot." I start to feel uneasy, like Jake is going to make me do something I am not going to want to do. "I think that I deserve some fun." He suddenly notices my face and smirks. "Not that kind of fun." I let out a well-needed breath, not noticing that I was even holding my breath until now. "An agreement," He smiles widely, liking whatever he has come up with. "Here's the rules." He hands me a piece of paper that he was keeping in his jeans pocket. I unfold it and stare at the messy handwriting. Player's can- Sweet talk Play fight Talk 24/7 Tell each other good morning and good night every day Take walks together Give each other nicknames Hang out with each other's friends Go on dates Talk on the phone all night long Hold each other Kiss Hug And whoever falls in love first, loses (Nobody can be dating anyone during this agreement or else they automatically lose) (Winner gets the opposite player to do anything they want them to do)
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