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Fiction
Mystery
The Villages, The City and The Highlands.... Three different environments, societies and people... Although they each exist on their own, there seems to be something connecting them. Is it the girl Peter found lying in the streets, almost bleeding to death? The war or the peace? Or even the Boxes?
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Three girls, in three different worlds. Yet they are all strangely connected. They are all haunted by a ghastly creature. NOTE: This story jumps between three different characters in a disorienting way, which I did intentionally (for a reason that I can't say without revealing spoilers). However, in hindsight, I realize that this might also be off-putting to some readers. If you are not dissuaded, you will begin to see a pattern to the transitions (and the reason for them), and I promise you that, by the end, everything will come together and make sense. Anyway, let me know what you think! Is the way I tell this story interesting and mysterious, or just confusing?

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